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Indifference

Postby cyclops overlord » Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:28 pm

you claim that i have failed you.
with all of the lies that i misuse
but you have forgotten about me.

i question your empty smile
and your compliments that you pile
because you have forgotten about me

it's hard to see the reason for tears
those you have shed through the years
when you have forgotten about me.

what more can i do for you now
if you can't simply tell me how
you gained a reason to forget about me?
when we laugh, you laugh with me, but i laugh at you
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Re: Indifference

Postby dish » Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:27 pm

Nice man, very dense and lyrical.

In general when I read your words it makes me wanna transform it into songs..

Is it about a love going down the hill?
If so, I kinda know what that kind of getting forgotten feels like.
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Re: Indifference

Postby cyclops overlord » Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:35 pm

dish wrote:Is it about a love going down the hill?

kind of. it's a feeling that i have very often, what with my gf off globe-trotting as a result of her job.
feel free to use it for a song, just be sure to give me credit for the writing :D
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Re: Indifference

Postby dish » Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:25 pm

Thanks dude, I can't say right now when or if I might work something out into that direction, because I'm kinda over it now, it was some love that went when I turned crazy and could have really done with it being still around then, so getting back into it might not be the smartest thing to do atm, I wish I could have put a song with that text on RefleXionS though, the albums on which I'm working now have pretty much a different theme where the love kind of moodiness doesn't fit in, I will deffly keep it in mind though, I must say I really appreciate your writings and wish I could come up with more lyrics like that myself, be sure you'll get the credits though if or when I do work it out ;).

I hope it all goes well for you and your relationship, it sucks when growing into unimportance for someone you have deep feelings for..
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Re: Indifference

Postby Syphax » Tue Mar 24, 2009 1:37 am

when you are happy, you tend to forget what sadness is like. and vice versa.
luckily i am on the happy end of things.

i owe it all to Hikari..
Very nice though. I dug it big time.
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